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its not fair!!!

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05 Nov 2012 13:16 #1 by christieconnors
christieconnors created the topic: its not fair!!!
this is a song i have written about the boy i loved who dumped me for another girl then finds it funny to rub it in my face!!! :( :angry:

I thought that you loved me
I thought that you cared
In this break up
My heart wasn’t spared

I gave u my heart
My love and my trust
And what did you do?
You turned my heart into dust!

I thought you loved me I thought you cared.
Why oh why this isn’t fair!!!

What did I do?
Did I offend you?
Was it something I said in that love letter???
What can I do to make things better?
I loved you, I loved you
Its not fair, its not fair
I loved you I loved you
Did you ever care???

So you found someone else
She’s the one apparently
But u don't need to rub it in
And try to upset me

I saw you at school this morning
Kissing in the yard
You saw me, laughed and carried on
My hearts forever scarred

I thought you loved me I thought you cared.
Why oh why this isn’t fair!!!

What did I do?
Did I offend you?
Was it something I said in that love letter???
What can I do to make things better?
I loved you, I loved you
Its not fair, its not fair
I loved you I loved you
Did you ever care???

why did I trust you?
This pain is all my fault
it hurts so much
Like getting a wound and rubbing in salt

You told me you loved me
That was a lie
You betrayed me and cheated
Then you made me cry
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06 Nov 2012 05:11 #2 by TeamBreezy2012
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It's a beautiful song :)
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06 Nov 2012 17:20 #3 by christieconnors
christieconnors replied the topic: its not fair!!!
thanks i am trying to get the music to play along with it on piano its not easy though!!!

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06 Nov 2012 17:21 #4 by TeamBreezy2012
TeamBreezy2012 replied the topic: its not fair!!!
Ye it won't be east but when u do finish it all the hard work that u put into it would be worth it

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06 Nov 2012 17:24 #5 by christieconnors
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ye i know i have changed some of the lyrics and its going well!!! i wont sleep untill im done!!!

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06 Nov 2012 17:28 #6 by TeamBreezy2012
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Well good luck with it :)

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06 Nov 2012 17:48 #7 by christieconnors
christieconnors replied the topic: its not fair!!!
thank you :) you always make me feel posotive about the stuff i do!!! youre a real good friend!!! xxx :silly: ;) :cheer: :) XD

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06 Nov 2012 19:13 #8 by TeamBreezy2012
TeamBreezy2012 replied the topic: its not fair!!!
Ur welcome :) haha ye well whenever I can help someone I will help them no matter what it is and anyway u have great lyrics and I know u will do well with coming up with a melody.....I'm just here to offer it support XD

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06 Nov 2012 21:21 #9 by bradbrowne
bradbrowne replied the topic: its not fair!!!
Yeah TeamBreezy2012 is right you got a good set of lyrics :)
And were all here to supprot you B) :) :lol:

Roses are red, Violets are blue, These handcuffs don’t work, So f*** the lot of you

haha sorry bored
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07 Nov 2012 12:26 #10 by christieconnors
christieconnors replied the topic: its not fair!!!
IVE DONE IT!!!!I HAVE MY CHORDS AND MELODY!!! IM SO HAPPY!!!!!! :D

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