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LONER'S MELODY

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16 May 2015 17:45 #1 by RadioHateCrime
RadioHateCrime created the topic: LONER'S MELODY
VERSE:
My days are Melancholic and gray,
I'm convinced of something that I must pay,
I feel like I'm in a hamlet play,
My weeks are null and filled with tragedy and dismay
There's something that I wish to confess and say,
(I want you I need you I love you)
My months are suicidal and gray,
Will I comment suicide today?
In the most gruesome way
My years are morid and black,
I feel like sleeping on a train track
Am I having a heart attack?
Cause.......

CHORUS:
I confuse passion with anxiety
I shouldn't have taken it lightly
This heartache is killing me
(oh what a loners melody)
Loneliness is all I see
Emptiness is all that's in me
What illness could it be?
(Oh what a loners melody)
It hurts so much I can't sleep,
These emotions cut so deep,
Is my heart or soul to keep?
(Oh what a loners melody)

VERSE:
My seconds and minutes are unbarable,
My humor and jokes are so terrible,
So that being in my presents is painfully awkward and intolerable,
These scars this evidence is conpulsive uncontrollable,
To say that I'm okay is bullshit,
To say I'm not lonely I'm full of it,
To say this shit doesn't bother me just means I'm in denial,
She asks won't you smile?
No I won't no I won't because I'm pitiful
No I won't no I won't because I'm pitiful
My hours and days are supposedly a rebellious gothic phase
But I feel so close and compelled by these obscure suicidal ways
I'm always the loner in social plays
I'm not a poser it's not a phase
Cause........

CHORUS:
I confuse passion with anxiety
I shouldn't have taken it lightly
This heartache is killing me
(oh what a loners melody)
Loneliness is all I see
Emptiness is all that's in me
What illness could it be?
(Oh what a loners melody)
It hurts so much I can't sleep,
These emotions cut so deep,
Is my heart or soul to keep?
(Oh what a loners melody)

VERSE:
My mornings and nights always start and end with argumentative fights
so distressing that I cut myself and turn off the lights
So i can bleed out the distortion of these oral knife and gun fights
There's only darkness and nothingness left in my sights
No chance at seeing hope's encouraging lights
My afternoons and midnights usually progress in the cutting of myself and the struggling of internal fights
Cause I'm my worst enemy dimmer of my confidence and self esteem lights
I feel like peter pan in a closet wearing pink tights
Saying I don't wanna grow up as I put a veil of depression over my confidence and self esteems lights
I'm so broken,beaten,bloody from these internalized fights
Society says I have no rights

VERSE:
Every waking minute and withering second my mental glass is filled with depression and anxiety,
Forced to swallow it down to the depths of me gosh it's so lonely,
Down in that vacant pit of nothingness,loneliness,and bullshit,
I'm so full of it that happiness and stability have no place to fit
Thanks to the depression,loneliness,numbness,and consistent bullshit
I think I need a suicide kit so I can end this resounding melody and bullshit
Cause I've had enough of it all since.........

CHORUS:
I confuse passion with anxiety
I shouldn't have taken it lightly
This heartache is killing me
(oh what a loners melody)
Loneliness is all I see
Emptiness is all that's in me
What illness could it be?
(Oh what a loners melody)
It hurts so much I can't sleep,
These emotions cut so deep,
Is my heart or soul to keep?
(Oh what a loners melody)

VERSE:
Day in day out I'm filled with anguish and doubt
As I'm being sniffed by an imaginary pigs snout
Day in day out the jar in my hollow chest is over filled I desperately want to let it out
But I'm silenced by insecurities and self doubt
I long to throw away my masquerade
I long to be free of this delusion so that the price is paid
I long for love instead of feeling numb and promiscuously getting laid
I'm like a ghost or a shade a wallflower the choice was preordained it was one that I  never agreed to be made

VERSE:
I confuse it I confuse it I confuse it I confuse it all (X6)

CHORUS:
I confuse passion with anxiety
I shouldn't have taken it lightly
This heartache is killing me
(oh what a loners melody)
Loneliness is all I see
Emptiness is all that's in me
What illness could it be?
(Oh what a loners melody)
It hurts so much I can't sleep,
These emotions cut so deep,
Is my heart or soul to keep?
(Oh what a loners melody)

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16 May 2015 18:30 #2 by chevyloo487
chevyloo487 replied the topic: LONER'S MELODY
i like the basic idea here, my suggestion would be to shorten it down a little bit, i'd stick to three verses and maybe tweak the last chorus

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