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AM I A VAMPIRE?

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01 May 2015 15:49 #1 by RadioHateCrime
RadioHateCrime created the topic: AM I A VAMPIRE?
VERSE:
I killed myself in june,
My scarlet violins in tune,
Playing my tragic melody,
Will you love me?
Will you miss me?
Cause I will love you,
I will miss you,
Can my razorblade cat lick and kiss your wrists?

CHORUS:
I've got bullets on my wrists,
And razors in my eyes,
I can't keep up this disguise
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
Am I a vampire?
Am I a vampire?

VERSE:
Looks like your cherry lotus is in full bloom,
You were raped by a razor compulsion is your doom,
As your scarlet violin is played upon your skin your conceived out of the devils womb,
Born damned born castrated heavens your long lost tomb,
Looks like the flowers of death and hate are in full bloom,
You were abducted by prescription pills that you took not for the thrills,
Damn her looks do kill as the goblet of suicidal lust gets filled,
Jesus gets stuck with humanity bill,
Is this how you truly feel is gods love real?
Cause it's not like medusa's tits I can feel
Looks like jesus made a bad deal is death even real?

CHORUS:
I've got bullets on my wrists,
And razors in my eyes,
I can't keep up this disguise
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
Am I a vampire?
Am I a vampire?

VERSE:
She bites me when I'm sober dressed like depression even though it's not December or October,
I'm as ruthless as a runaway rolling bolder,
My personality gets colder and colder you'll get frostbite from leaning and crying on my shoulder,
A freak nature I never get older like an undead peter pan defiant of get older so let her take a bite on my cold dead shoulder,

VERSE:
She licks me when I'm sober dressed like death even though it's not December or October,
I'm oblivious as a hurricane,
Here's a cup now drink my pain,
Here's a cocktail laced with cyanide and blood from my vein,
Am I lost? Or just insane?
Am I lost? Or just insane?
Am I lost? Or just insane?
Am I lost? Or just insane?
Am I lost? Or just insane?
Am I lost? Or just insane?

CHORUS:
I've got bullets on my wrists,
And razors in my eyes,
I can't keep up this disguise
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
Am I a vampire?
Am I a vampire?

VERSE:
She mutilates my wrists as I sleep awake in my coffin,
Everyday I feel like the incarnation of a sin I'm a fallen,
I often wonder when will my suicide begin cause I'm so dead I have no skin,
Just a skeleton a naked sin,
I often wonder when did this suicide rampage begin?
Was it when I was born again sin?
Was it when I was stripped of my skin?
Was it when I died from within?

VERSE:
Will you mutilate your wrists in my name like I do yours?
Will hang and suffocate the things you hate and can't bare?
I don't care I don't care if your undead undead
I don't care I don't care if your undead undead
I don't care I don't care if your undead undead
Do you siphon from peoples staggering blackening hearts?
That house pain,jealousy,self loathing,and regret
It's not so much a threat it's  just the haunting regret
How's it going being a razorblades pet?
Alright bullies place your bets
For when she'll suicide
AHHHHHHHHH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

CHORUS:
I've got bullets on my wrists,
And razors in my eyes,
I can't keep up this disguise
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
To my surprise I ask
Am I a vampire?

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03 May 2015 20:11 #2 by dannphan29
dannphan29 replied the topic: AM I A VAMPIRE?
I'm going to be BLOODY honest here. (pun INTENDED)
The vampire theme itself is a little over used at this point. It typically won't get much attention, at least not at this time. I would attempt to drift away from that metaphor if possible. Of course, if you can't, it's fine. Just saying. xD
Also, the song is a little redundant. (repeats the same thing in a slightly different way) Like, if you end a verse with "kiss your wrists", it's a little funky to then sing afterward in the chorus "on my wrists". You know what I mean?
The lyrics are overall pretty great though. Fine work, chap. :)

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