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SOPHIE ( ORIGINAL SONG )

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07 Feb 2015 16:57 #1 by RadioHateCrime
RadioHateCrime created the topic: SOPHIE ( ORIGINAL SONG )
As she descends from those vicious steps
In her pale blue dress she desperately try's to hide her distress
All while trying to seduce me in her depressed dress
I ask her would i love you any less?
She replied yes as she vented on her depression and distress
As she attemped to stain that pale blue dress
With suicidal blood till she drowned in a scarlet flood
Of her own blood

Sophie why are you so depressed and lonely?
Do you not have me? Or am i just a sexual coping mechanism cause your depressed and lonely?
Sophie Why are you so obsessed and boney?
Will you not eat? Will you not trust and believe in your teddy bear that is fluffy and sweet?
Why listen to the mockingbirds of the monochrome streets?
Why do you enjoy pleasure from a knife underneath the sheets?
Am i just a rumor you gossip about on the monochrome streets?
Or just another layer of your cold lonely bedroom sheets?
I SAW THE TRUTH IN YOUR TWEETS!

As she lays in her cold lonely bed
Oh rest your troubled head on your angels lap i said
I know you don't truly wish you were dead
Its all in your head its all in your head
Rubbish that those mockingbirds said
As she wakes up from her empty slumber
Each day she feels weighed down by depressive lumber
That causes her to long for an eternal slumber
All to be free from the mockingbirds and cloud like lumber
Weighed over her like guilty black clouds in the sky
Why can't you live,love, try do what you gotta do pray to the father in the sky
cause i know you don't really want to die
Still i ask why still i ask why you mutilate yourself over a delusion over a lie
I cry

Sophie why are you so depressed and lonely?
Do you not have me? Or am i just a sexual coping mechanism cause your depressed and lonely?
Sophie Why are you so obsessed and boney?
Will you not eat? Will you not trust and believe in your teddy bear that is fluffy and sweet?
Why listen to the mockingbirds of the monochrome streets?
Why do you enjoy pleasure from a knife underneath the sheets?
Am i just a rumor you gossip about on the monochrome streets?
Or just another layer of your cold lonely bedroom sheets?
I SAW THE TRUTH IN YOUR TWEETS!

Can't you see i can hear your anxious scarlet melody?
THAT YOU SING FROM THE SCARS DRAINING YOUR MISERY!
Demanding understanding and attention from friends and family
As they ask why would you turn to such brutality?
You reply YOU DON'T KNOW ME! YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND ME! YOU DON'T SEE ME!
AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your just a chemleon in this judgmental prejudice society
I'M NOT YOU YOUR NOT ME!
SUICIDE WILL SET YOU FREE?!
FROM THE RELENTLESS PAIN AND MISERY!
OH!!!!!!!!!!!!YOUR HUMANITY!!!!!!!!!!!

Is drowning is plummeting down you don't make a sound
As your a walking talking corpse above ground
As your sorrow resounds and your loneliness rebounds
AHHHHHHHHH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Being chased by fashion hounds that are socially politically out of bounds
THERE'S NO NEED TO RUN FROM THOSE IDIOTIC FASHION HOUNDS!
RESONATE WITH THE CONFEDENCE WITHIN THAT RESOUNDS!!!!
UGHHHHHHHH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
YOUR LONELINESS REBOUNDS AGAIN AND AGAIN!
AS SOCIAL HYENAS GOSSIP AND LAUGH ABOUT YOUR AFFLICTIONS ADDICTIONS!
AHHHHHHHHH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Sophie why are you so depressed and lonely?
Do you not have me? Or am i just a sexual coping mechanism cause your depressed and lonely?
Sophie Why are you so obsessed and boney?
Will you not eat? Will you not trust and believe in your teddy bear that is fluffy and sweet?
Why listen to the mockingbirds of the monochrome streets?
Why do you enjoy pleasure from a knife underneath the sheets?
Am i just a rumor you gossip about on the monochrome streets?
Or just another layer of your cold lonely bedroom sheets?
I SAW THE TRUTH IN YOUR TWEETS!

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16 Feb 2015 19:30 #2 by GiDyer101
GiDyer101 replied the topic: SOPHIE ( ORIGINAL SONG )
I liked the way you used all the word plays to show an image that you didnt actually see with you r eyes. It was like I could see but also feel the streets too. I really did like it. I think the title was good too, because, to me, the song seems to be about all the pain and hurt that makes up Sophie.

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