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Help with a song

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17 Jan 2015 17:50 #1 by Albionunfound
Albionunfound created the topic: Help with a song
Hi my name is Sam and I'm a new songwriter. I've got this song called another day. I've got the chorus down but I keep on changing the verses. Here's the chorus

"And I would let the sun burn out
Let the moon crash in the earth
If it meant
I could've spent
Another day with you"

So that's the basic chorus I have some other things planned out but if anyone could help with the verses I would be incredibly grateful.
Thank you in advance

-Sam

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10 Feb 2015 18:21 #2 by ecwds
ecwds replied the topic: Help with a song
Today's the day, that I would fear.
Just yesterday we were so near.
Hand in hand, round the earth we'd go.
How long it'd take us, we'll never know.

You told me that, this'd be for life.
Fate pats you on the back, then stabs you with a knife.
I would have swam, the entire ocean for you.
All the anxieties, you'd get me through.

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