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Already Gone-original song-opinions?

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03 Dec 2014 13:24 #1 by songsareallineed
songsareallineed created the topic: Already Gone-original song-opinions?
I'm a beginning sonwriter.I want to be a musician more than anything.Please share your opinions about my song,thanks!
I was told to let the past go
But I know a lot more than you think
Tell me to forgive and forget
Well ain't it funny who's saying it
Think I don't know how you put on a show
And tell me how you really care
I don't dare to fall for it
How do you live with yourself baby?

Chorus
Oh baby,I can't go on this way
You think you're running away when you're just hiding
And slipping out the door
Too late,too late to trust you,babe
I'm trying to fight and keep my mind
And watching you lie and lie,oh
I'm already gone

Verse 2
You tell me not to cry
I can see you lying,it's in your eyes
You pretend you don't know anything
You tell me I'm a faker
You're the victim,I'm the hater
I'm not the one being deceiving
The way I see it,it's the other way around

Chorus

I'm seeing red
You say it's all in my head
But I know where you've been
And it ain't good

Chorus

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