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Movin' On

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17 May 2014 15:35 #1 by Dpressnall
Dpressnall created the topic: Movin' On
I'm writing this song as a mid to up tempo "Country" song. Really not quite sure about it, and would like to hear some feedback from other people's perspective. Thanks!

(Verse)
So he said that he was done, and that
He has went and found himself someone
Who gives him what the two of you once had

Promises broken and people change, and that
Nothin' ever seems to stay the same
Except your love for him, but that's too.....bad

To think of him with someone new
Girl it's just about
As bad as usin' gasoline
On a flame that won't go out.....

(Chorus)
HEY........................
Pain last twice as long, when you
PLAY.....................
Play that same ol', same old song....
Girl, what's done is done
Yeah, 'he's really gone
And if you wanna get him back
Start movin' on

(Verse)
It's hard to wipe away those tears, when they
Flow like memories from all those years
Reminders of the way things used to......be

To second guess every move you make
Girl it's almost like
Bat in hand, steppin' to the plate
With bases loaded and two strikes....

(Chorus)
HEY.......................
Pain last twice as long, when you
PLAY....................
Play that same ol', same old song....
Girl, what's done is done
Yeah, he's really gone
And if you wanna get him back
Start movin' on....

(Bridge)
Don't ever think for once that you're not worth it
Don't ever rate yourself as second best
I know right now it's hard to see you standin'
But, trust me babe
It won't always be like this.........

(Chorus)
HEY......................
Pain last twice as long, when you
PLAY..................
Play that same ol', same old
HEY.....................
Pain last twice as long, when you
PLAY...................
Play that same ol', same old song.......
Girl, what's done is done
Yeah, he's really gone
And if you wanna get him back
Start movin' on

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