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15 Apr 2014 07:40 - 15 Apr 2014 07:41 #1 by Musiclover
Musiclover created the topic: Crashing
Please comment and critique on my song "crashing"!:-) I'm not sure it's finished yet, I will probably add another verse.

I've no idea where you're going
Can't tell how you feel
spinning out of control
loosing grib of the wheel

I would have done anything for you
you would have let me too

we go a little faster
ignoring all signs
keep gong faster
until we hit the lights

And I am crashing, I am crashing
see everything is flying
as I am crashing, I am crashing
you're just standing there, as I disappear
as I crash, as I crash


lying flat on a highway
all I see is stars
trying hard to remember
but I can't tell who you are

I would have gone anywhere with you
but you left me unable to move

we go a little faster
ignoring all signs
keep gong faster
until we hit the lights

And I am crashing, I am crashing
see everything is flying
as I am crashing, I am crashing
you're just standing there, as I disappear
as I crash, as I crash
Last Edit: 15 Apr 2014 07:41 by Musiclover.

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20 Apr 2014 10:33 #2 by Chussey
Chussey replied the topic: Crashing
This is awesome- I can already think of a melody in my head, especially for the chorus. You should totally record this, would love to help if possible

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22 Apr 2014 16:55 #3 by Musiclover
Musiclover replied the topic: Crashing
Thanks a lot, I sort of have a melody in my head, but haven't completely figured it out but I'll try and record it when I do. However I would love to hear how you imagine the melody if you feel like it:-)

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