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I Wanna Get Close To you

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10 Apr 2014 16:55 #1 by Irwin
Irwin created the topic: I Wanna Get Close To you
Do I have to make any changes in this lyric?

I am adding a link of voice only to demonstrate the way I have it as to how the melody sounds in my head.Please have a listen here:



I Wanna Get Close To you
©2014 Irwin Abrigo
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V1
I know you love to Laugh
You have a beautiful smile
Looking into your eyes
Leaves a picture in my mind
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(Chorus)
I wanna get close to you
I wanna get close to you
I'll do what you want me too
If I can get close to you
I wanna get close to you
I wanna get close to you
Baby tell me what to do
So I can get close to you
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V2
I don't to know your number
I would like to know your name
I Wanna get closer
Wantin knowing we're the same
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(Chorus)
I wanna get close to you
I wanna get close to you
I'll do what you want me too
Just to get close to you
I wanna get close to you
I wanna get close to you
Baby tell me what to do
So I can get close to you
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(Bridge)
many times our eyes meet
When walking out on the streets
Hoping you would pass today
So I can say what I wanna say
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(Change)
If you're thinking what I'm thinking
If you are single I am single
You wanna walk you wanna talk
Wanna fall in love I wanna fall in love
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(Chorus)

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10 Apr 2014 17:49 #2 by dannphan29
dannphan29 replied the topic: I Wanna Get Close To you
you don't HAVE to make changes of course. though there are a few things I, personally, would change. xD
like... for verse 2, I would probably say this instead:
I don't know your name,
but I feel like we're the same.
I wanna get closer
cause you're driving me insane.

your melody is a little weird for me, so as you can tell, those lines don't have the same amount of syllables. ^_^' but it could fit.

RaInInG fIrEfLiEs

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