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Peter Pan

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18 Mar 2014 17:09 #1 by Musiclover
Musiclover created the topic: Peter Pan
Please feel free to comment and critique on this little song i just wrote:)

Time it flew by, so fast and so did childhood
how did we get here, it seems crazy dear
swingsets and playgrounds switched out with real life
from my first steps, to my own adress
living in memories, at least they will always be,
mine, goodtimes

So now it's time to grow up, i guess
Are you ready yet
Never saw it coming never had a plan
Guess i always thought i was like

Peter paaaaaaaaan
Peter paaaaaaaaan
So I'll stay forever young
fly away with the other ones
if you could come with me
but no it can't be
Life's not quite like disney

I wish I knew then all that i know now
well, to be completely true, i wish i never knew
once we saw through eyes, that didn't know lies
a magical view, so innocent too
Living in memories, someday the present will be too,
I hope they will be good

So now it's time to grow up, i guess
Are you ready yet
Never saw it coming never had a plan
Guess i always thought i was like

Peter paaaaaaaaan
Peter paaaaaaaaan
So I'll stay forever young
fly away with the other ones
if you could come with me
but no it can't be
Life's not quite like disney

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06 Apr 2014 16:01 #2 by dannphan29
dannphan29 replied the topic: Peter Pan
ehhhh. :l it's okay. I feel like the lyrics could be a boatload better.

RaInInG fIrEfLiEs

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