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03 Jan 2014 04:55 #1 by Musiclover
Musiclover created the topic: Power
Please feel free to comment and critique my song "power", i would be very helpfull to me. The song is written as a pop song, a kind of girly song. It is about overcoming something and turning it in to power- it can be a broken relationship, a past or simply your own insecurities holding your back.


It used to be,
I was so
Powerless,
I had no control

I was afraid
I didn’t fight
You made me think
That I wasn’t right

You held me down for so long
You told me
That I wasn’t strong
You owned me

But no more,
My lesson was learned
The table has turned

Now I’m Fire, I’m rain
I’m lightning, I’m thunder
All of the pain,
Only made me stronger
Stronger than you ever were
Try me I dare you,
My power will scare you
You can’t bring me down
Cause I got the power now

It used to be,
I just went along
So helplessly,
But no more

You killed me,
But I survived,
Now you see
I’m coming alive

You held me down for so long
You told me
That I wasn’t strong
You owned me

No more,
My power was earned
Watch the table turn

Now I’m Fire, I’m rain
I’m lightning, I’m thunder
All of the pain,
Only made me stronger
Stronger than you ever were
Try me I dare you,
My power will scare you
You can’t bring me down
Cause I got the power now

You will never hold me down again
I’ve come so far since then
Never again

Shoot me I won’t fall,
Push me I’ll stand tall
Now there’s no bringing me down
I got the power now

Now I’m Fire, I’m rain
I’m lightning, I’m thunder
All of the pain,
Only made me stronger
Stronger than you ever were
Try me I dare you,
My power will scare you
You can’t bring me down
Cause I got the power now


Power, power
Power, power, power

I got the power now

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28 Feb 2014 13:17 #2 by AmyLeigh
AmyLeigh replied the topic: Power
I really like this one. It really gets it's message across in a powerful and engaging way. Probably my favourite one of yours :) Do you think you could maybe take a look at my song “Sword” and perhaps give some feedback/criticism? I would really appreciate it if you did!

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04 Mar 2014 09:36 #3 by Tha Storyteller
Tha Storyteller replied the topic: Power
This is very good.

I like the arrangement. Its a standard arrangement so for someone like me I can imediately pick it up, put together a melody and see where each step up is through the verse, pre hook and hook.

I really like that hook. Think that could be a nice big element in the song.

Did you have a melody in mind? can you share it? sing on somthing like audacity (free music recorder)..

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