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Time Machine

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08 Nov 2013 15:13 - 08 Nov 2013 15:14 #1 by Musiclover
Musiclover created the topic: Time Machine
Please feel free to comment and critique my song "Time Machine". The song is supposed to be very stripped down pop-piano, a bit similar to the style of Adele's song "someone like you". Some of the lines might look a bit off cause of the difference in length, but they work with the melody so far:)

Now we se
what we
have done
standing in a town that is gone
flames are raining down
what do we do now

pre-chorus:
What If we,
Just delete
Delete it all

If we could start over
all over
erase it all

forget, forget
go back, go back
lets be
each others time machine
lets be
each others time machine


what if time never flew
what if we never knew
if could go back
before it all cracked
I've died to many times
erase it from my mind

pre-chorus.
What If we,
Just delete
Delete it all

There's no going foward
so lets start over
erase it all

forget, forget
go back, go back
lets be
each others time machine
lets be
each others time machine


you look into my eyes
say what i've been trying to deny

We can't go back in time
we've died too many times
you say, there's no way we could survive
going through it one more time

we said, so much we regret
we can't forget, can't go back
at night I will dream
that we owned time machines
maybe one we will meet
if they invent time machines

but for now I'll let you be
Last Edit: 08 Nov 2013 15:14 by Musiclover.

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24 Dec 2013 12:17 #2 by Swimmer12313
Swimmer12313 replied the topic: Time Machine
I like the lyrics! if you put this to music, I think it will be great!

- Swimmer12313

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